Dylan Sense (please check)

Full name: Dylan Sense
Any Nicknames?: Dy
Age:15
Years at Camp: 3 years

God and mortal Parent: Hestia and Frank Sense
Date of Birth: 4.3.1997
Place of Birth: Washington

Appearance: Blonde Hair, Blue eyes
Eye color: Blue
Hair: Curly blonde hair
Height: about 1.69
Body type: Athletic, strong, fast
Distinct markings: A scar above his left eyebrow
Personality: Dylan has a good sense of humour, hes cheeky and very truthful!
Style: Usually Dylan wears his orange camp t-shirt with normal jeans.His camp necklace contains three beads and a
magical Ring.

Powers: Dylan can summon a fire in his hand or can make people feel comftorble. Dylan can also make people feel
more hopeful.He can do this about 4 times a day and then he passes out for 20 minutes.
Fatal flaw: He gets very easily offended.
Flaws: Dylan HATES the water and he is really bad at canoeing.

Weapon(s): Dylan owns a CB sword . The ring on his camp necklace turns into a dagger which he uses in emergencies.
Pets: Dylan has a wolf named Luxa. Luxas fur is absouloutley white, exept for a ring around her eye which is black.
Talents/skills: Dylan seems to be good at climbing and has a bit of skill in swordplay. He loves playing on instruments,
which makes people think Dylans a son of Apollo.

RP example:
As I wake up The morning sun shines through the hestia cabin. Jeez! I think why cant i have some more sleep?
When i walk to archery (which i fail at) Somthing catches my eye. A small wolf, whith brilliant white fur is standing by
an oak tree. As i walk up to it it growls. "steady girl." I say. " I heard you can keep pets here!You want to live in
the hestia Cabin with me?" The wolfs eyes widen. I notice a black ring around her eye. "its okay girl" I say
"im gonna keep you! Im going to name you Luxa."

Biography:
When Dylan was two Hestia left Dylan with his idiotic father.When he was five he could control weak fire.His father noticed, and when
Dylan turned six, his father gave him the magic ring on his camp necklace. when he turned nine he fought his first monster, which was a giant snake. When he turned twelve, a Hyberborean(Ice giant) attacked him and gave him his scar. his dad drove him to camp .
He never saw His father again, since he is a year rounder.
He made some new friends like Leo brings and Drave Ripley.

Hey PJ, I can see the great potential fo Dylan. Just a quick favor, could you add more to the Bio? Otherwise you need power restrictions ((Such as my character Nic, he has the Styx Immportality but there are only certain times he can use it and it gets weak with each time.)) Thanks for the character application

EDITED!!!

The application is okay so I guess...
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