Brick Layer - Poem ouo

Subject: Brick Layer - Poem ouo 9/5/2013, 9:58 pm

I'm cursed to watch

The walls of the foundation

Crack and crumble and fall

The little pieces crashing around me

And I stand in the center

All alone

But in the distance I hear

The muffled cries of those most loved

Begging me, pleading with me

To fix the damage

But no glue, no tape, no amount of plaster

Is capable of repairing that which no longer is

So I fall to my knees and beg

For forgiveness for something I never did

And as everyone else searches for a new home

I am left with flecks of dust slipping between my fingers

Unable to move on, unable to breathe at the thought

Of forgetting the memories that made me who I am

So I remain a brick layer

Attempting to fix that which is incapable of being repaired

Even as I am told to move on

Because I recall being told it was all my fault

And believing it

With everything I had

Subject: Re: Brick Layer - Poem ouo 9/5/2013, 11:39 pm

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I have no words. YOU'rE SO GOOD AT WRITING DEMI OR SHOULD I CALL yOU

demi-GOD(dess)
;D

that was really powerful, and I really enjoyed it. I'm sorry for my kind of funny gif ruining the tone, but it was so well-written!

Subject: Re: Brick Layer - Poem ouo 9/7/2013, 2:56 pm

Ahhhh dying here agh your so nice~! Gaaah thank you so much hnnnnn >///<

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