My Half Blood (new version)

Full Name:

Henry Williams

Any Nicknames?

Hank

Age:

14

Years at camp:

2

God and Mortal parent:

Hephaetus and Mary Williams

Date of birth:

June, 23 1998

Place of birth:

Boston, Massechussets

Appearance:

Brown hair, blue eyes, usually wears a black or white t-shirt, and oops almost forgot straight hair, usually wears khakis, 6ft. 4, Tall, skinny, Nice (means will defend others when they are in need)

Style:
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Powers:

I can control two machines with my mind at max when I use this power and I can use it twice a day but every time I use it I get very tired but I can barely fight.

Fatal Flaw:

My fatal flaw is that I am skeptic. It is fatal because I can easily be lured to a trap if they threaten my friends. I can surrender easily when my friends are near the doors of death. Being a skeptic can easily bring me to my doom. When I hear that my friends are in danger I will stop at nothing to save them.




Flaws: Not good a soccer, bad with regular animals

Weapon:

Celestial bronze axe

Pets:

(no pets)

Talents:

Able two create any weapon

Rp example:

"WHY DID YOU TAKE MY FRIENDS?" I yelled. "Ah good question lets just say they are a GIFT" the monster said. " YOU BRING THEM BACK" I yelled. "How bout no" the monster said calmly. The monster takes out a sword. " I won't lose" I said and I drew out my sword ready to fight.

Biography:

My name is Henry, but, you can call me hank. After I was born strange things have happend, like when a little dragon snuck into my room when I was 5 somehow I pulled his wings of with my hands. Second, I learned that I could create tons of different machines. It was pretty fun at first but then I got oil in my eyes ( it hurt like Tartarus) so I decided not to do it for awhile. Now even stranger things are happening I ran into this place called Camp Halfblood and they say it's for people just like me. Things are looking brighter now I hope they stay like that.

I'm sorry, but I'm afraid we can't hand out Big Three god parents to just anyone. They're pretty powerful, y'know. If you really want one, I suggest RPing on the site for a while, then submitting an application to an administrator for a demititan/Big Three.

Ok thank you for telling me

Ok I made a new version hope you like it

Ok, One we'd prefer it if you didn't double post, but thank you for making a new version of the form all the same.

Now. Onto business. How much does controlling the machines drain them. Also how does he control the machine? Does he just bark orders at it like it's a slave or is it like a PuppetMaster type thing where he actually makes the movements with is body and the machine copies those movements as best as he can. And one more thing, how many times a day can he control one or 2 machines?

O yeah sorry bOut that I can control the machines with my mind. Example: I see a machine I think turn on then it would turn on. I can only do this twice a day. And lastly controlling the machines drains about half of their motor, but, if I get unlucky there a chance the whole machine might rust. ( btw what's double post I've never heard of it?).

Check your PM's..revise your limits according to what I told you through that, and then edit all the limits into your form and I can approve this character.

Ok I did it

Hmm...Your descriptiveness...will need work..but that will have to be dealt with over time.

As for the character I don't really see anything else wrong with it so Approved.