Dragon of the West Mortal
Posts : 123 Join date : 2013-11-23
| Subject: You thought Kilohana was bad? 2/11/2014, 3:36 pm | |
| Full name: Haulani Kamehameha Any nicknames?: None Gender: Boy Age: 17 Years at Camp: 1
God and mortal parent: Bia and Kualii Kamehameha Date of birth: 6/6/1996 Place of birth: Honolulu, Hawaii
Appearance(a picture, if you don't have one you could give a description or just leave it blank): [spoiler]http://t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQXPbYKOBt_ePfSZ2xBOaU1bwySxqlxrCnJeyyMauEmap9ZHcNB" /> Eye color: Brown Hair(color, length, style, etc.): Black Height: 6’10” Body type(tall, skinny, fat, etc.): Lean Distinct markings(freckles? Scars? Birthmarks? Etc.): Well, he has 666 marked on his left hand as a scar… well, Haulani thinks it is a scar. Personality(Are they angry, nice, friendly, unique, violent?): You thought Kilohana was bad? His brother is much, MUCH worse. Haulani is violent, malevolent, angry, and all of those are much worse than his brother is.
Powers**: None… Fatal Flaw: Gets angry easily. I know this was also Kilohana’s fatal flaw, but again, Haulani is much worse. Flaws(2 other random flaws, like sucks at volleyball, is afraid of cats, etc.): Arrogant, feels like he needs to get rid of all emotions to be a true warrior, and obnoxious
Weapon(s): Oh, you thought the kitchen utensils were over? No, Kilohana is just a true Hawaiian warrior. Haulani on the other hand, he has a celestial bronze frying pan Pets: None Talents/Skills: He is strong and smart in battle
RP Example*: I walked through the courtyard with my friend Jez. She was a good friend, and everyone else was training. And to be absolutely honest, I sorta had a crush on her. But I had to eliminate all emotions. It was the only way to become a true warrior. Even if I had to never find love… ever. Biography*: Haulani is Kilohana’s only brother. He grew up with Kilo and wanted to protect him. In fact, Kilo was the only friend Haulani had for a long time. Then Haulani went with his brother and father when his father went on a business trip to New York. Then Haulani actually got friends. He got nine friends, each after proving he would make a good edition to their group. Each gave him a task to complete without any help. Cato Hirami had him withstand a full Kamehameha. Haulani did that, but just barely. Charles Kimaro had Haulani best him in a battle of strength, with no weapons or powers. Haulani did that easily. Amanda and Jezebel Wright had him bring them a special item… it was perfume. Haulani almost died walking into the mall. Cho Rokuko had Haulani swim 5 laps in a pool, mostly because Cho has hydrophobia. Haulani questioned how that would prove himself. Icyono Matiyuni had him destroy a wall of ice, created by Icyono. Haulani did this. And then he did some more tasks for four more people. Then they all went to camp. But Haulani left Kilo. Haulani was given a celestial bronze frying pan at camp.
Other Notes: None
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Dena Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550 Join date : 2010-05-03 Age : 25 Location : Earth
| Subject: Re: You thought Kilohana was bad? 2/11/2014, 6:50 pm | |
| Alright first of all, the height is a no-no. We don't need a world record breaker here, nor do we need a horribly disproportionate person. Please keep his height realistic - and by this I mean under seven feet.
That's really my big problem with this. I don't think you realize how tall 7ft is, and I'm surprised someone else approved a form with something as outlandish at that. The world record is 8'3" roughly, and even at 7'4" there would be some spine damages I'd reckon from having to remain hunched over indoors. And knee troubles too, from sitting in cramped areas.
Sorry that got mildly ranty. | |
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Dragon of the West Mortal
Posts : 123 Join date : 2013-11-23
| Subject: Re: You thought Kilohana was bad? 2/11/2014, 6:55 pm | |
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Dena Demi-Titan
Posts : 6550 Join date : 2010-05-03 Age : 25 Location : Earth
| Subject: Re: You thought Kilohana was bad? 2/11/2014, 6:58 pm | |
| Hn. Barely better, but I suppose it's good enough. For future reference though, try to keep your characters at normal heights - that being 6'3" and lower.
Regretfully approved. | |
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