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PostSubject: Yurp!    3/21/2013, 8:42 pm

Demigod form:

Full name: OJufemi Neferet
Any nicknames: Femi
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Years at Camp: < 1 year

God and mortal parent: Serket, the Egyptian goddess of Scorpions, and a unknown mortal man.
Date of birth: March 31, 1997
Place of birth: Luxor, Egypt

Eye color: Light golden brown

Hair: Long and wavy light brown, matches her eye color to make her eyes pop.

Height: Tall for a girl, but not towering. 5'9

Body type: Slender and fit

Distinct markings: A large scorpion tattoo on her thigh. The tattoo often moves from her thigh to other areas of her body, literally moving like a scorpion under her skin. The tattoo looks of a

Egyptian origin, much like the markings in a tomb. The tattoo is about 20 inches long and 12 inches wide.
Personality: Femi is outgoing in nature, always excelling in one thing or another.

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Femi is able to summon the giant scorpion, Amun, that her mother sent to her. When summoned, Amun scrawls out from under her skin and as it moves her tattoo crawls out with it, like the tattoo marks where he is. As Amun leaves her body, it grows in size. Amun crawls around her body to crawl out of her skin, showing its growth in size easily. Femi grows through extreme pain as Amun leaves her body, as her skin is being ripped open by the beast. No scars or marks are left by the process.

When fighting with Amun still trapped in her body, she is able to use Amun's extremely venomous poison in her attacks. This works by when Femi's body makes contact with another person, Amun's tail wraps around under her skin to where just the sharp point of his tail protrudes her body. This tip penetrates her opponent's body and enters the blood stream, quickly causing severe a severe burning sensation, temporary paralysis, and in some cases, even death to creatures. The paralysis can fluctuate depending on how much toxin was injected and how each individual body reacts. Amun's toxin can also be used as a pain killer when injected in small amounts. This ability hurts her a bit, but not as much as when it completely leaves her body.

Femi is able to talk to Scorpions of any kind.

Fatal Flaw: Femi has an extreme and possibly deadly reaction to scorpion toxin.

Femi, like a scorpion, she can stay completely still. If she stays still she can retain nutrients and go without food for up to three weeks.

Flaws: Femi is easily irritated and would rather hide then fight. When in danger or threatened, she will fight, but if she feels she can avoid the fight all together she will. Femi doesn't realize her own strength so she is often hurting those she loves.

Weapon: Femi is not very skilled at weapons, but she owns a broad sword named Nu. Femi is better with hand-to-hand combat.

Pets: Amun is Femi's only pet. The giant male scorpion is about three feet tall with the exception of his tail. He is extremely aggressive towards anyone but Femi and cautious to those who Femi commands him to be nice with. He is a enlarged version of Androctonus crassicauda. Amun is a dark grey, with turqoius spikes on his tail. Amun has extreme strength, as normal scorpions do, as well as his large toxin filled tail. His claws are large and sharp.

Talents/Skills: Femi is talented in singing and dancing. She enjoys playing sports of any kind and she skilled at them.

RP Example: Running her fingers through her hair absent mindedly, Femi sits as far away from the other campers as possible. She sighs and rests her head on her arms quietly. A girl with long black hair sits beside and tilts her head. "Hi.. I'm Evey, whats your name? You're new here." Femi sits up and smiles softly. "OJufemi, but it's easier to call me Femi.. and yea, I'm new." Evey smiles softly and pats her head. "Well, come on, I'll show you around then.."

Biography: After Femi was born, her birth father sold her to another man. For most of her life Femi lived as a drug mule, traveling all around the world. When she turned fourteen Femi was attacked on a drug run by a Serpopard. That was when her mother sent Amun to be her guardian. The first time Amun entered her body she went through excrutiating pain. The mist made her unofficially adopted father believe she was attacked by a enemy drug cartel and this led him to believe she was dead. This lead her stranded and alone in the middle of America, which is a foreign country to her. On her fifteenth birthday a satyr found her and took her to camp.


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PostSubject: Re: Yurp!    3/21/2013, 8:54 pm

Just change the things I mentioned over skype. And...I'm not sure about the Scorpion's size...*will ask Admin to look and give opinion on*

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PostSubject: Re: Yurp!    3/21/2013, 10:37 pm

What can her pet scorpion do? Is his venom deadly? How does it affect people?

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PostSubject: Re: Yurp!    3/21/2013, 10:39 pm

That's all detailed in powers?
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PostSubject: Re: Yurp!    3/21/2013, 11:08 pm

Sorry. That was confusing. Anyhow, I hate to be a party pooper but I feel like the venom is far too powerful. I mean, it'd be okay if used appropriately, but I just feel like you're not going to get much use out of it if it's going to cause people's characters to be paralyzed? Sure, it could work on monsters, but... I don't know. I think something more like temporary paralysis or less severe injury would be more appropriate.

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PostSubject: Re: Yurp!    3/21/2013, 11:24 pm

Yea, I HAD thought about that at the gym but I was at the gym and phone-less! Just got home so I can change it. Smile I originally meant it to be temp but I guess the way I put it didn't make it seem that way. ^_^''
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PostSubject: Re: Yurp!    3/22/2013, 12:01 am

The form looks good now. Approved.

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