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PostSubject: New Character/ Craig Nickleson son of Ares   3/17/2013, 3:45 am

Full name: Craig Cibereus Nickleson
Any nicknames?: No
Gender: Male
Years at Camp:1

God and mortal parent:Ares, Judith Nickleson (mother, deceased)
Date of birth:April 5,1998
Place of birth: Newyork, Newyork

Eye color: Blue
Hair(color, length, style, etc.): Blonde, crewcut
Body type(tall, skinny, fat, etc.): Built
Distinct markings(freckles? Scars? Birthmarks? Etc.): A birthmark that looked similar to a Boar on his left shoulder.
Personality(Are they angry, nice, friendly, unique, violent?): Violent with a short temper, but finds it easy to control his anger around people he likes. When he makes a promise he keeps it.
Fatal Flaw*: not trusting people
Flaws*: Hates singing, cant dance, when he gets mad he says things he doesn't mean. He gets to full of him self in a heated battle. His sword has to be balanced perfectly or he he wont be the best that he can be in a fight.

Weapon(s): a 3 foot celestial bronze sword
Pets: none
Talents/Skills: A great fighter

RP Example*: I awoke in the middle of a battle field ,in some woods, after a rouge chariot ran me over (some how I survived). I saw my fellow campers around me fighting off a small army of monsters. So I grabbed a sword from a fallen camper and joined the fight. I charged the enemy when I found myself staring into an eye of a 12ft Cyclops (wielding what looked like a small tree as a weapon and a car door as a shield). As it bore down the tree at me I narrowly rolled out of its path, and proceeded to stab the Cyclops in the back of its knee. It crippled because of it's wound, that's when I struck the final blow, by stabbing him in his eye.

Biography*: Craig had never known his father and didn't want to know him, because he had left Craig all alone with his mother and they were poor. At five years old Craig began to notice that he was different from the other kids and that he did see weird creatures walking around him. He also had a short temper when he was eight he had gotten expelled from his first school for causing a fight that turned into a riot in the streets. After he had been expelled from three more schools Craig was now a 13 year old. At his new school he had met a short kid with black short hair and a little fuzz on his chin, he also had crutches. His name was Sam Lighttree. They ha become best friends over the year. One day Craig was called down to the office and was told that his mother had died in a car accident earlier that morning. After shool that day Sam offered to have his dad drive him home, Caig excepted the offer. But Sam's dad just kept on driving past his house and drove further into the wilderness. Eventually they stopped at the bottom of a hill with a Big white farm house on the other side of it. Sam's dad told them to get out so they did and then Sams dad drove away leaving them behind. Then Sam led Craig down the hill towards the big white farm house.

/Notes: Sorry if it's bad it's my first try at this kind of thing.

Last edited by saytrsrule on 3/18/2013, 10:30 am; edited 3 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: New Character/ Craig Nickleson son of Ares   3/17/2013, 1:10 pm

This form is pretty good! Can you just add a better personality description? He needs a few positive personality traits, even if he's not the nicest person.

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PostSubject: Re: New Character/ Craig Nickleson son of Ares   3/17/2013, 9:52 pm

Thanks for the compliment! I think I fixed the personallity for him. And how do you know if it's a approved Char forum?
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PostSubject: Re: New Character/ Craig Nickleson son of Ares   3/17/2013, 10:47 pm

you can tell because an approver will comment saying the form is approved, and they will move it to the approved character forms section.

also, could you give some flaws other than hates singing and can't dance? like, something that would be a personality or physical flaw, like he bites his fingers when he gets nervous or can't keep his leg still or comes out harsher than he intended to. just something that kind of gives him more personality. other than that, the form is great!
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PostSubject: Re: New Character/ Craig Nickleson son of Ares   3/18/2013, 10:36 am

I fixed the flaws i think, and thanks for the compliment!
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PostSubject: Re: New Character/ Craig Nickleson son of Ares   3/18/2013, 12:03 pm

I like this form. Good job and approved.
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