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PostSubject: Hope I'm doing this right!.. WIP but do comment!   2/10/2013, 7:00 pm

Demigod form:

Full name: Eveleen Burns
Any nicknames?: Evey
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Years at Camp: 1

God and mortal parent: Child of the greek god Deimos, the god of fear , and a unknown mortal.
Date of birth: January 24, 1997
Place of birth: Unknown

Appearance: Evey is around 5'6 with a slender, muscular build. Her hair is long and raven black, usually kept up in a ponytail. She keeps long swooping bangs, which offsets her murky green eyes. On her left shoulderblade she has a crude tattoo of a black bird in flight. Her body is riddled in scars and almost always covered in bruises. Evey's personality is simple. She is a shy girl with few cares for her self being. She is often getting in trouble with authority due to her disobediant nature. She dresses herself in dark colors.

Powers: Evey has the ability to project fear into the people around her. This ability tires her out depending on how many individuals it affects. This does not affect everyone, especially those who do not focus on her or look into her eyes. The fear may be resisted by people who have a high self control.
Fatal Flaw: Evey has a rare disease called congenital insensitivity to pain with anhidrosis, or CIPA. This disease rids her unable to feel any pain. This makes her unable to know when she is fatally injured so she is likely to go on unaware of any injuries she has. She is often over-working herself and going unconsious at random times.
Flaws: She is afraid of almost everything. She is extremely shy and does not like to use weapons.

Weapon(s): Only carries one weapon on her due to her dislike of violence. This is a necklace that has a pendant of a crow. The tail of the crow pulls out of the body to reveal a small dagger.
Talents/Skills: Evey loves writing short stories and poetry. She is very good with hand to hand combat, but only will fight if forced.

RP Example*: Evey looks up from the thick book she was reading. Before being talked to she seemed dissconnected from her surroundings. She blushes and smiles at the person before her. "Oh my name? I'm Eveleen.. It's ironic wthat my father named me that. Eveleen means 'longed-for child' and my mother left me alone since I was three." She brushes her bangs out of her eyes and looks back down at her book thinking for a moment. She stands up and brushes the sand off of her shorts.
Biography*: She was born and left to her mortal father. At the age of three her mother left her in a hotel room and a cleaning staff member found her and took her home. She was raised by them until the age of thirteen. After that she ran away due to abuse from her unofficial family. Since then she has been on her own.


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PostSubject: Re: Hope I'm doing this right!.. WIP but do comment!   2/10/2013, 7:33 pm

You need at least 5 sentences in your biography, I'm sorry but the only myths that are allowed here are Egyptian, Norse, Greek, and Romans(Which are really just another form of greek just with their own special camp). I've tried before to getting other myths in but there was too much problems. And since the Irish parent isn't allowed, your powers kinda aren't able to be approved by extension.

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PostSubject: Re: Hope I'm doing this right!.. WIP but do comment!   2/10/2013, 9:35 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Hope I'm doing this right!.. WIP but do comment!   2/10/2013, 11:52 pm

Is this still a WIP? Smile It looks great so far!!!!

EDIT: But can people resist the fear she projects into the air?

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PostSubject: Re: Hope I'm doing this right!.. WIP but do comment!   2/11/2013, 12:03 am

Yea they can! I guess I didn't specify that well enough. Smile I'll fix that and then I guess I'll be all done!
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PostSubject: Re: Hope I'm doing this right!.. WIP but do comment!   2/11/2013, 12:06 am

Sounds good! I really love how she has an insensitivity to pain, I feel like it would be so interesting to roleplay a character who has that condition... especially a demigod! Approved

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Matthew James Maguire, lucky irish son of Caerus,
Riley Peterson, son of Geras who turns randomly into an old man,
Catheryn Cade, stubborn unclaimed daughter of Psyche,
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