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PostSubject: Finished!   2/6/2013, 2:20 pm

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Full name: Arayla Nikki Kaylee
Any nicknames?: Kayla, Nikki, Ara or ANK.
Gender: Arayla is Female.
Age: 16
Years at Camp: Completely new to Camps buisness, yet she decided to be a year-rounder.

God and mortal parent: Demeter and Mark Kaylee.
Date of birth: 31 of December.
Place of birth: Dublin, Ireland.

Appearance(a picture, if you don't have one you could give a description or just leave it blank): Above
Eye color: Green and Brown, plainly amazing.
Hair(color, length, style, etc.): Blonde, slightly curly, yet short.
Height: 4 foot 6
Body type(tall, skinny, fat, etc.): Slim, but people say shes slightly chubby around her neck. (Which she isnt.)

Distinct markings(freckles? Scars? Birthmarks? Etc.): Freckles across her whole face, and a few scars across her back, which look like perfect circles.



Personality(Are they angry, nice, friendly, unique, violent?): Arayla is rebellious, she never does anything you say, which gets her into trouble. She likes stealing Boyfriends and is a good runner and brags alot about it. She hates other girls saying that she has 'In-fashion' shoes, since she wants to be a little different from other people.

For some reason Arayla likes Heavy Metal and Rock.



Style(This is optional:try http://polyvore.com/ to make it): Arayla likes wearing thin, worn out t shirts with patterns on them.
Powers**: Arayla can grow a plant of her choice 5 times a day. The plant does not include trees, though she can grow fruit bushes. She is very tired, which includes dizzyiness and hallucanations. The hallucanations would be about her worst fears, like being stuck in a large crowd, or being alone at night. The plants will grow up to 20 inches, which is quite small. If they are a bush, it will grow for about 30 to 60 inches.

Fatal Flaw*: Araylas fatal flaw is saving other people, even if she knows shw ill get herself killed in the process of doing so. Really she just wants fame, but if she is emotianally attactched to that person, she will do it because they are her friend.

Flaws*(2 other random flaws, like sucks at vollyball, is of cats, etc.): Annoying, afraid of large crowds and being alone at night.

Weapon(s): A thin throwing knive, which she names Ely, and its CB.
Pets: Yep. A Fat cat named Kathy, brown and striped, which she loves over anything.
Talents/Skills: Running/Foot races, Any sporting activity and Playing guitar.

BEFORE CAMP
RP Example*: Arayla sat in her bedroom, eating a bowl of Ice cream, reading a magazine. She whistled and grinned at some of the boys in the pages. Eventually, Arayla stood up and tossed the now empty bowl to the side. She called up on her boyfriend, Randolph. She hated his weird name, but he was kind and... Nerdy. He didnt answer the phone, so she put on some comfy clothes and swung on her jacket. She tried to call him again. No answer. She huffed. Randolph always answered the phone, unless he had band practices, which were on Sundays. Today was Friday! She twisted the door knob, and went outside before calling, "Bye, Dad! I just need to check on Randolph!" She slammed the door behind her, but afterwards she came back huffing and puffing. "Not good."


Biography*: Arayla was raised in a big family, with several siblings. She had one half brother named Mark, and a half sister named Cassandra. Cassandra got kidnapped, and was never seen again. Arayla had a few problems in school, like the girls that always bullied her. She had to move several schools, mainly because she would punch people alot if they annoyed her. She only had about 2 friends at each school, because she wasnt good at making friends.

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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/12/2013, 10:29 pm

Please explain how bragging is a fatal flaw. The personality needs work. The first and third paragraph sound like notes to me. I've had this double checked. Only the middle paragraph sounds like a personality at all.

Powers- How big can the plants be? How long do they last? How tired do they get- to the point to needing a nap? Dizzyness? Does there need to be a certain amount of time between plants? What kinds of plants and does she has full control over their actions?

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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/13/2013, 4:19 am

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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/13/2013, 1:25 pm

One inch is tiny, even for some plants. Also, you didn't edit the personality. Please edit it.

I asked to explain the fatal flaw because I wanted to see if you understood the flaw or not. You don't quite get it. But it can be a fatal flaw. (Sorry about that. In my experience, people don't understand their own fatal flaws in the forms.)

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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/14/2013, 9:40 am

Edited, again.
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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/14/2013, 5:05 pm

Uh...could you please retype the bio so that it makes sense. Right now it just sounds like a bunch of short sentences that you had typed. It is more of a notes section than a bio.

The fatal flaw: Well, I have characters with similar flaws as yours but please explain. Is it a thought that she can't lose or is heroism to the extreme. Saying she will save anyone just sounds like she likes to fight.

Other than that, I like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/24/2013, 3:26 pm

Edited, sorry this took me so long.
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PostSubject: Re: Finished!   2/24/2013, 3:48 pm

I guess it is okay...I would've liked a better Bio but it works for the application.
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