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Falcon3100
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PostSubject: My 2nd charrie ( please comment on your opinion)   10/8/2012, 9:16 pm

Name: James Desumo
Nicknames: Jam
Age: 14
Years at camp: 2
God and mortal parent Janus, Roman god of beginnings, ends, doorways, and choices. Maria Desumo
Date of birth: November 3rd 1998
Place of birth: Santiago, Chile

Appearance: (leavin blank)
Eye color: green
Hair color: Blond
Height: 5'2
Body type:Skinny, and strong
Distinct markings: scar on forehead from bumping into a mast when 3 and had to get stitches inside and out ( based on a real accident)
Personality: very joyful, kind, and friendly, doesn't try to be the center of attention (he hates it) and he doesn't get angry easily
Style: (ill leave it blank)
Powers: James has the power to find out if one is too risky or one isnt the best choice but also not the worst he can do this about 10 times each day without passing out. James will either get a minor or major headache before he passes out. the more risky the choices are the more the headaches hurt.
Fatal flaw: will trust people easily. So if a monster ( in human form then) says "trust me" then turns into a monster ill still trust him. After he trusts someone he tends to be helpful to them.
Other flaws:scared of making the wrong choice. Bad at football.
Weapon: imperial gold sword
Pets: (no pets)
Talents: can pick any lock
Rp example: "We should do what he says" James said. "What makes you think that that's choice is the right choice?" Henry said. "My dad is the God of choices remember" James said. "Oh yeah" Henry said and they did what the man said and wheat to the door.. "It's locked!" He said in shock. "I got this" James said as he brought out his lock picking tools and in about 30 seconds the door opened. "Boy" Henry said "am I lucky to have you around." So they walked through the door.
Description: James Desumo, an orphan, has never know his parents. His goal while in the orphanage was to get the spirits of the very depressed orphans. One day ,after breakfast, James was adopted by two adults named Murray and Elenor. One day they took him to an amusement park and met one of his old friends from the orphanage so they decided to go through a maze in the amusement park. When they started they immediately were in a bad place to be and were caught by crooks. They gave them a choice either go up the climbing wall behind them to escape or go through the tunel on the right. James thought they should climb the wall. His friend didn't trust him but he did any way and they went that way. After escaping the friend of James said that James had an unusual talent and it would be very useful. James asked him what he was talking about. The friend said he will tell the after they left the amusement park. When they were out it was a different place. James asked where they were and the friend said welcome to Camp Jupiter. For some reason his friend was shrinking and turned into a wolf the wolf said that she had seen enough and he is ready to go to Camp Jupiter. James hoped this was a place that would accept him like the orphanage so he walked in hoping this was the right choice.




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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd charrie ( please comment on your opinion)   10/13/2012, 6:44 pm

Your power is a bit... vague, and it probably won't come up much. Since Janus is the god of choices, maybe you want to give your character an advantage at decision making? For example, they can sense whether a choice will be advantageous or risky? That would make more sense, and would apply to the door situation as well.

Other than that, your form seems pretty good!

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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd charrie ( please comment on your opinion)   10/14/2012, 5:03 pm

Fixed and if you know Latin you will realize Desumo is Latin for chooser.
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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd charrie ( please comment on your opinion)   10/14/2012, 5:46 pm

Cool! I took a few months of Latin when I went to Catholic school, but I never learned that! Anyway, approved.

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PostSubject: Re: My 2nd charrie ( please comment on your opinion)   10/15/2012, 3:04 pm

Liz already approved your application but it was never moved to the approved section. I am now moving it.
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