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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Dakota Fras 7/26/2012, 7:21 pm | |
| Character Name: Dakota Fras Gender: Female Age: 8 Description: brown hair and brown eyes, fair skin, 5"1, average weight Personality: beautiful but deadly, likes to trick people into liking her, backstabber God and mortal parent: unclaimed Powers: none Flaws: has an obsetion with winning, lier, scared of the dentist Pets: none Weapon: CB Dagger Talents/Skills: Individual Dodgeball RP Example: I walked into the gym It was individual dodgeball day. THis was the game I owned. I grab a ball and began begging my sneaky self. I saw of petty kid trying is best to dodge.It time to kick some a** Biography: Dakota was born in Seattle. Her father left them a few weeks after her birth. She became a child model when she was only 4 months old. Overall Dakota had a better childhood because her mother was rich and she made a lot of money on her modeling job.She stayed with her mother until she was 8 and they took a road-trip to NYC and CHB where she left Dakota Notes:
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Mason Mortal
Posts : 349 Join date : 2012-04-06 Age : 22 Location : Camp Half Blood
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 10:35 am | |
| Add one sentence to your bio and RP example. Also, how many chars do you have? You seem to be running out of slots for characters. | |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 12:08 pm | |
| This is his 8th character Mason, 2 more and then he has to start paying for more slots.
He's 13 years old. All demigods have to be claimed by age 13...unless you have a good reason why they haven't been claimed yet. | |
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 12:26 pm | |
| I'd say they only have to be claimed by the age of thirteen if the character's going to be Greek. So, if you're planning on making her Egyptian or Norse, it should be fine. Seeing as only the Greek gods made the oath to claim their kids by thirteen. | |
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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 12:30 pm | |
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Wednesday Demigod
Posts : 998 Join date : 2012-01-04 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 1:03 pm | |
| Acting mysterious is not a flaw. It's a mannerism for the personality. Change that flaw. I suggest adding another flaw too, most likely a fear or something. Fears make for more believable characters. | |
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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 1:11 pm | |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 1:15 pm | |
| Exactly....How is individual dodgeball used for evil? | |
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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 1:18 pm | |
| She tricks people in it and does underhanded stuff | |
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Mason Mortal
Posts : 349 Join date : 2012-04-06 Age : 22 Location : Camp Half Blood
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 1:53 pm | |
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Zwn (Zoe in Greek) officer, i just want you to know that i'm not like other girls; i'm cute and quirky
Posts : 8143 Join date : 2010-04-18 Location : bed
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 1:55 pm | |
| Unapproved. That would hardly be considered evil. If someone used their talents for evil, it could mean their talents could also be used for the greater good. | |
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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 3:12 pm | |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 3:28 pm | |
| Debates is not a Skill or talent. | |
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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 7/27/2012, 3:34 pm | |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 8/17/2012, 8:22 am | |
| Lieing and Tricking people too much are technically one in the same. Add one more flaw. | |
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Gravity Demigod
Posts : 650 Join date : 2012-06-01 Age : 24 Location : None of ya business!!
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 8/17/2012, 7:48 pm | |
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Dexter Minor God
Posts : 8306 Join date : 2011-01-14 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Dakota Fras 8/17/2012, 8:03 pm | |
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