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PostSubject: Dakota Fras   7/26/2012, 7:21 pm

Character Name: Dakota Fras
Gender: Female
Age: 8
Description: brown hair and brown eyes, fair skin, 5"1, average weight
Personality: beautiful but deadly, likes to trick people into liking her, backstabber
God and mortal parent: unclaimed
Powers: none
Flaws: has an obsetion with winning, lier, scared of the dentist
Pets: none
Weapon: CB Dagger
Talents/Skills: Individual Dodgeball
RP Example: I walked into the gym It was individual dodgeball day. THis was the game I owned. I grab a ball and began begging my sneaky self. I saw of petty kid trying is best to dodge.It time to kick some a**
Biography: Dakota was born in Seattle. Her father left them a few weeks after her birth. She became a child model when she was only 4 months old. Overall Dakota had a better childhood because her mother was rich and she made a lot of money on her modeling job.She stayed with her mother until she was 8 and they took a road-trip to NYC and CHB where she left Dakota
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 10:35 am

Add one sentence to your bio and RP example. Also, how many chars do you have? You seem to be running out of slots for characters.
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 12:08 pm

This is his 8th character Mason, 2 more and then he has to start paying for more slots.

He's 13 years old. All demigods have to be claimed by age 13...unless you have a good reason why they haven't been claimed yet.

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 12:26 pm

I'd say they only have to be claimed by the age of thirteen if the character's going to be Greek. So, if you're planning on making her Egyptian or Norse, it should be fine. Seeing as only the Greek gods made the oath to claim their kids by thirteen.
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 12:30 pm

Edited. No she's greek
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 1:03 pm

Acting mysterious is not a flaw. It's a mannerism for the personality. Change that flaw. I suggest adding another flaw too, most likely a fear or something. Fears make for more believable characters.

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 1:11 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 1:15 pm

Exactly....How is individual dodgeball used for evil?

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 1:18 pm

She tricks people in it and does underhanded stuff
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 1:53 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 1:55 pm

Unapproved. That would hardly be considered evil. If someone used their talents for evil, it could mean their talents could also be used for the greater good.
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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 3:12 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 3:28 pm

Debates is not a Skill or talent.

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   7/27/2012, 3:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   8/17/2012, 8:22 am

Lieing and Tricking people too much are technically one in the same. Add one more flaw.

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   8/17/2012, 7:48 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Dakota Fras   8/17/2012, 8:03 pm

Aproved I guess.

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