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 Daisy Smith and the Favor from the Gods

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PostSubject: Daisy Smith and the Favor from the Gods   Daisy Smith and the Favor from the Gods Icon_minitime5/7/2011, 7:41 pm

Chapter 1-I told you so

My name is Daisy Smith. I'm seventeen years old. Myy life was normal until today at my high school graduation. I was so excided finally getting away from my miserible school life. I was sitting in my seat waitting for my name to be called.
I had one of my greek myth books in hand. My best friend Cammila just sighed when she saw my book. She reached over for it but I moved it out of her reach. "Daisy it's time to give up on the greek myths are real thing," she said. "But it's real I swear on the river styx it's true," I said putting the book in my graduation gown.
"Stop with the greek stuff. If I can give up on Foo you can give up greek myths," she said, " Both me and your family not to mention your friends agree."
I looked down at the ground remebering my promise. "It is the end of the year and I know I can't get an expansion beacause I've had five years," I sighed then continued, "I'll start worrying more about my future."
She was about to say something when my name was called. I quikly went up on stage to get my diploma and give my speach. Then there was a rustling in the forest and something that soundded like growling.
I went to start again but it started again but it started again but soundded louder and closer. "What is that noise?" asked a woman in the croud. It was getting closer every second. Then flew an arrow out of the forest hitting the back board barely missing my head. I yanked the arrow out it seeemed diffrent than a usual arrow.
I stuck the arrow in my graduation gown. When I looked up a dracnae came out of the forest, it was the size of a school bus. "Dracnae," I muttered. I watched how people grabbed their children and ran screaming away. "Dracnae!" I yelled. I moved my black hair out of my face looking in awe at it.
I seen a couple of women and a couple of men come out of the forest weapons drawn. But there was a boy in the croud he looked about seventeen, short black hair and blue eyes. I would have stared at him all day. I heared Cammila scream, I looked over and seen one of the dracnae's tails slam into Cammila, the force was so great she flew into some chairs and nocked her out. I gasped then glared at the dracnae pure hatered in my glare.
I ran over and took the sword from the buff one with short brown hair and sun glasses, "Hey," he said. I glared at him then ran in front of the monster. It growled at me then pulled out it's sword. I slashed at it's mid section it moved out of the way I quikly slashed off an inch of one of it's two tails.
It screamed out in pain. I smirked, "Not so tough now are you," I yelled. I seen a chair just right I sprinted over over to it jumped off it and cut it's head off. I fell on my side rolled over and stood up, "That's what I'm talkin' about," I say. I walked over and picked up the things head. I chucked the head out of the way. I seen Cammila get up I smiled at her then passed out because of too much blood loss.
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PostSubject: Re: Daisy Smith and the Favor from the Gods   Daisy Smith and the Favor from the Gods Icon_minitime5/8/2011, 10:35 am

It was good, but not the best. I'm sure it would be amazing with just a little bit of editing.
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