The Last Chance of Freedom

The Last Chance of Freedom
By: Hinotori759, Deox759, The Wind God etc. etc.
Introduction
Running. The last thing I wanted to happen was get Jesse killed. But now… I doubted anything that I thought was true. They were gaining on me. My breath pierced the cold night. I keep on running, running from my enemies who were former allies. A gun shot rings through the air and I fall limp to the frost and snow. I couldn’t feel anything, even the snow touching my skin. I faintly hear footsteps crunching across the snow and frost. “Let’s throw him into the river Thames.” “Yeah, whatever.” I hear 2 voices and was roughly picked up and tossed into the river. The ice crushes underneath me and I slowly sink and was washed away.

When you have characters talk, you start new paragraphs.